9. Decisions

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/gallery/29239857#/d49bom2

I think I am going to declare this the end of the first section. I am going to take a break from writing this to write something different I will also take the time to combine these into a proper section and post it

8. The world outside your world

again sorry for the delay but this is another long part of the story I might take a bit of a break from this story to post some of my others


http://mm1145.deviantart.com/#/d45ylcu

7. Night

small section this time but is sandwitched between two large sections

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/gallery/29239857#/d3lp3en

Closing the rift

sorry for the long delay in getting this posted but I have been bissy and have not had much time to write

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/art/planestraider-part-6-215243379

this section is about twice as long as the others but I could not find a convient time to split it and it did not feel right to stop in the middle of the action

home

part 5 of travles with a planestrider is now up

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/art/planestraider-part-5-208311276

The Copeshore rift

part 4 of the travle with a planestrider is now up

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/gallery/29239857#/d3fhe2i

Through the forest

part 3 of travles with a Travels with a planestrider this is getting suprisingley easy to write

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/art/planestraider-part-3-204465699

Unexpected Friends

the second part of Travels with a planestrider is now up hope you injoy it
http://mm1145.deviantart.com/gallery/29239857#/d3cxu21

Travels with a planestrider

Now I have this place to put things I am going to try out something different than what I thought I might do

I am going to write a story and post up each small part as it is finished rather than as with my other stories waiting till the entire part is finished. Very like the way a web comic is posted a page at a time. as before I will post the story and then a bit more to this post explaining about it.

so I hope you enjoy the first part of "Travels with a planestrider"

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/gallery/29239857#/d3c4wrc

This is acutely the latest of my story worlds and it is the result of the flash of inspiration I posted about last post it will be interesting to see if people can spot what I have been inspired by.

I am a bit worried for 2 reasons
1 I am jumping in without a total plan of where I am going. I have most of it mapped out but not all and as I am posting it as I go along retcons are going to be a issue.
2 I was worried when I was rereading it that I might be being a bit to heavy handed in the wording but I am letting it stand is it is

Part of what I am trying out with this story is writing it form pure first person and I found that much easier than I expected and almost easier than the style I have chosen for my other writing