Travels with a planestrider

Now I have this place to put things I am going to try out something different than what I thought I might do

I am going to write a story and post up each small part as it is finished rather than as with my other stories waiting till the entire part is finished. Very like the way a web comic is posted a page at a time. as before I will post the story and then a bit more to this post explaining about it.

so I hope you enjoy the first part of "Travels with a planestrider"

http://mm1145.deviantart.com/gallery/29239857#/d3c4wrc

This is acutely the latest of my story worlds and it is the result of the flash of inspiration I posted about last post it will be interesting to see if people can spot what I have been inspired by.

I am a bit worried for 2 reasons
1 I am jumping in without a total plan of where I am going. I have most of it mapped out but not all and as I am posting it as I go along retcons are going to be a issue.
2 I was worried when I was rereading it that I might be being a bit to heavy handed in the wording but I am letting it stand is it is

Part of what I am trying out with this story is writing it form pure first person and I found that much easier than I expected and almost easier than the style I have chosen for my other writing